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Angol forrásnyelvi szöveg Hallgatói humán fordítás magyarra Gépi fordítás magyarra Megjegyzés GF-ről s A comma should be added after the word beautiful because the next word, and, is a coordinating conjunction in a compound sentence. + Ihe sentence that starts with the subordinate phrase to carry about my #1 goal of complete privacy contains a dangling modifier and should be rewritten. + Ihe phrase no wedding planners or outside resources were hired should be rewritten in the active voice. + Ihe word end in the phrase the end results is redundant and should be eliminated. + There should be acomma after spectacular because, once again, itseparates a coordinating conjunction and in a compound sentence. .85 +
